To be continuedDid you guys enjoy this chapter?
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Iron, May 21st, 2013, 10:56 am
Noooooeeeeessss I want more upates!!!!!!
Tacto, May 27th, 2013, 10:33 pm
I have enjoyed the whole story so far :D
It flows wonderfully, the pace is really great, love the dialogue and it works great with your visuals. Really pretty awesome! Keep it going! :D
Blue Kitty, May 27th, 2013, 10:54 pm
@Tacto: Thank you so much!! I hope I can continue to keep it up and improve!
Your words have encouraged me to do just that!
Tacto, May 27th, 2013, 11:09 pm
@Blue Kitty: Please continue and don't lose heart :) You already have a wonderful grasp on things like pacing, humor and dialogue which are really difficult - the rest will just keep getting better and better as you go.